Monday, May 31, 2010

Celebrating the End of an Era in Publishing

Garrison Keillor wrote an interesting column published in the St. Petersburg Times.

In it he bemoans the passing of an era in book publishing. He concludes by saying:
Children, I am an author who used to type a book manuscript on a manual typewriter... And mailed it to a New York publisher ... I waited for a month or so and then got an acceptance letter in the mail. They offered to pay me a large sum of money. I read it over and over and ran up and down the rows of corn whooping. It was beautiful, the Old Era. I'm sorry you missed it.

My first response to this was: maybe it was beautiful to Mr. Keillor, but to me, and to hundreds, perhaps thousands, of other writers who weren't writing what publishers were interested in publishing, it was yet another door slammed in our faces. Lesbian fiction? In the 80s, Naiad Press was the only niche publisher that would publish love stories about lesbians that ended in "happily ever after." Now we have at least 6 niche publishers publishing our stories, and many more of us have chosen to publish ourselves.

I was amused to note that of the 7 comments following the article (you had to register with the newspaper site to post), two were by self-publishers. One said: "Self-publishing has another upside: the ability to let the value of your work be decided directly by readers, not by a tiny population of editors in NYC."

Oh yeah. Readers. Let's think about readers for a minute. If we had no way to publish our own stories in the "Old Era," how were we supposed to find the stories we wanted to read? It seems to me that the "let all flowers bloom" publishing model benefits readers too.

It has been the case fairly recently (like last month) that people assumed anything self-published was crap. And granted, some of it is. But I have been observing my own reading behavior lately, and I've noticed that, while I have a pile of traditionally published fiction I intend to read, I more often choose my current read from the pile of books by niche publishers or self-publishers. The quality of the writing runs the gamut from quite good to woefully amateurish, but I read them anyway, because they tell the stories I most enjoy reading--stories about people like me.

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Reviews

In an earlier post, I mentioned that When Women Were Warriors Book I is a quarterfinalist for the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. Today Amazon sent me a link to some reviews by "ABNA Expert Reviewers." A selection from the reviews can be seen here.

The feedback on CreateSpace, which I had to log in to see, has entries from two "ABNA Expert Reviewers" and contains a review that doesn't appear on the public page. I found that review interesting because of this:

Reviewer 1 said:
Perhaps an opening action sequence, followed by the present opening, would get the book off the ground faster.
and
Although the book is a bit slow out of the wattled gate,

while Reviewer 2 said:
It would be nice to have more description of the setting, perhaps slow down the pace a little.

Which is why listening to everyone's advice can drive a writer crazy.

Reviewer 2 also said:
The strongest aspect of this excerpt is the beauty of the writing. It is descriptive, catching, and musical.
and
When Women Were Warriors has great strength of plot and prose.

Which is lovely, so I'm really not complaining.

Reviewer 1 also said:
The book might be better served by a stronger hook to catch the reader. Instead, the opening is more subdued, assuming that the reader will ride along patiently until some action (which is surely foreshadowed with all of the war talk) takes place. Perhaps an opening action sequence, followed by the present opening, would get the book off the ground faster.

This is advice I've never taken because of an experience I had quite a few years ago in a writers' group. One piece that we read started with a fight between two combatants who were trying to kill each other. It was very dramatic, but no one in the group could read past page 2. We didn't know who the combatants were. We didn't know who to root for. We didn't care about them. We didn't care who won. We just wanted it to be over, so that we could get acquainted with the world and its characters.

Perhaps the fact that all the members of the group were women accounted for our instant response of catatonic boredom when faced with several pages of two people we didn't know fighting each other.

The kicker was that the writer had originally started her book by introducing us to the world, the characters, and the issues before launching into the fighting. On the advice of her editor, she put the fight scene first, to "hook" the reader.

In the world of book publishing, there are some items of "received wisdom" that are never (almost never) questioned. One is that you have about 5 seconds to "hook" a reader, so you have to open with a whirlwind of activity that will keep a reader reading. Long, slow introductions are out of fashion.

I think this advice vastly underestimates our readers. It assumes that they have the attention span of a flea and not enough depth of understanding to appreciate something that goes deeper than what can be conveyed by action scenes.

Which is one reason why I'm glad I self-published. I wanted to tell the story the way I wanted to tell it. I wanted my narrator to tell the story as she was living it, step by step. The slow start prepares the reader for what is to come. And that seems to me to be appropriate for a three-volume epic.

Thursday, March 25, 2010

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When Women Were Warriors Book I is a quarterfinalist in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award

Today Amazon.com announced the 250 quarterfinalists in the General Fiction category for the 2010 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. Book I of my trilogy made the cut!

Here's the announcement.

They gave it a nice little review.

And two weeks ago the same book won an EPPIE! That's an EPIC ebook award. In the Mainstream category.

I must admit to feeling a bit stunned.

And lately I've had some lovely emails from folks who have read my books and liked them a lot and said some very nice things about them.

So I'm just going to enjoy all of this awhile. And maybe gloat a little.